{"id":7206,"date":"2013-01-02T14:37:57","date_gmt":"2013-01-02T19:37:57","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/lisatener.local\/?p=7206"},"modified":"2024-09-30T08:59:13","modified_gmt":"2024-09-30T12:59:13","slug":"how-to-write-a-first-sentence-that-draws-readers-in","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/jodieburdette.net\/lisatener\/2013\/01\/how-to-write-a-first-sentence-that-draws-readers-in\/","title":{"rendered":"How to Write a First Sentence that Draws Readers In"},"content":{"rendered":"<figure id=\"attachment_7207\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-7207\" style=\"width: 150px\" class=\"wp-caption alignright\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"size-full wp-image-7207\" title=\"bonniepicture2\" src=\"https:\/\/jodieburdette.net\/lisatener\/wp-content\/uploads\/2012\/10\/bonniepicture2.jpg\" alt=\"life coach bonnie leonard\" width=\"150\" height=\"163\" srcset=\"https:\/\/jodieburdette.net\/lisatener\/wp-content\/uploads\/2012\/10\/bonniepicture2.jpg 150w, https:\/\/jodieburdette.net\/lisatener\/wp-content\/uploads\/2012\/10\/bonniepicture2-138x150.jpg 138w, https:\/\/jodieburdette.net\/lisatener\/wp-content\/uploads\/2012\/10\/bonniepicture2-100x109.jpg 100w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 150px) 100vw, 150px\" \/><figcaption id=\"caption-attachment-7207\" class=\"wp-caption-text\">Life Coach Bonnie Leonard, Creator of The Reinvent Your Life &#8211; Write Now journaling program<\/figcaption><\/figure>\n<p>Here&#8217;s a great short book writing tip I had to share.<\/p>\n<p>After a bit of a false start with her first chapter, <a title=\"life coach and author bonnie leonard\" href=\"http:\/\/bonnieleonard.com\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">Bonnie Leonard<\/a> returned to <a title=\"book writing class\" href=\"http:\/\/lisatener.com\/book\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">book writing class<\/a> the next week having begun again. She shared a brilliant strategy I plan to try myself:\u00a0 she asked herself how she could start her book&#8211;and each chapter&#8211;with a line that immediately drew in her readers.<\/p>\n<p>Bonnie&#8217;s solution was to write down the first line of 15\u00a0 books she had around the house and see which ones worked and why.<\/p>\n<p>The result? When she shared her first sentences in class, we all agreed they were winners. Here are a few:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>\n<figure id=\"attachment_7882\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-7882\" style=\"width: 300px\" class=\"wp-caption alignleft\"><a href=\"http:\/\/fotosbydavid.com\/\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"size-medium wp-image-7882 \" title=\"moreumbrellas\" src=\"https:\/\/jodieburdette.net\/lisatener\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/01\/moreumbrellas-300x240.jpg\" alt=\"travel photos\" width=\"300\" height=\"240\" srcset=\"https:\/\/jodieburdette.net\/lisatener\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/01\/moreumbrellas-300x240.jpg 300w, https:\/\/jodieburdette.net\/lisatener\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/01\/moreumbrellas-1024x819.jpg 1024w, https:\/\/jodieburdette.net\/lisatener\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/01\/moreumbrellas-150x120.jpg 150w, https:\/\/jodieburdette.net\/lisatener\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/01\/moreumbrellas-768x614.jpg 768w, https:\/\/jodieburdette.net\/lisatener\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/01\/moreumbrellas-100x80.jpg 100w, https:\/\/jodieburdette.net\/lisatener\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/01\/moreumbrellas-640x512.jpg 640w, https:\/\/jodieburdette.net\/lisatener\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/01\/moreumbrellas.jpg 1500w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 300px) 100vw, 300px\" \/><\/a><figcaption id=\"caption-attachment-7882\" class=\"wp-caption-text\">David Donohue&#8217;s travel photos just lend themselves to Bonnie&#8217;s travel stories. More of David&#8217;s photos at http:\/\/fotosbydavid.com\/<\/figcaption><\/figure>\n<ul>\n<li>&#8220;I headed for my destination with a quickened pace and single-minded focus&#8230;&#8221;<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<ul>\n<li>&#8220;After the dinner of a lifetime, I wandered slowly back to my current residence &#8211; a family guest house in Bangalore.&#8221;<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<ul>\n<li>&#8220;The taxi driver dropped off the two other passengers at Hong Kong&#8217;s luxurious hotel, <em>The Peninsula,<\/em> then turned to ask me for a third time, &#8216;What address, hotel?'&#8221;<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>I love the last one, as you just know you&#8217;re in for an off-the-beaten-track adventure when the taxi driver can&#8217;t place the hotel. The whole chapter is filled with humor.<\/p>\n<figure id=\"attachment_7900\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-7900\" style=\"width: 231px\" class=\"wp-caption alignright\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"size-medium wp-image-7900\" title=\"FJournal-Cover-Reinvent-Sept-2012-for-web copy\" src=\"https:\/\/jodieburdette.net\/lisatener\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/01\/FJournal-Cover-Reinvent-Sept-2012-for-web-copy-231x300.jpg\" alt=\"Journal cover\" width=\"231\" height=\"300\" \/><figcaption id=\"caption-attachment-7900\" class=\"wp-caption-text\">Bonnie&#8217;s Course: Reinvent Your Life: Write Now<\/figcaption><\/figure>\n<p>Try it yourself. Find ten books you enjoyed and books that have done well and write down the very first sentence.<\/p>\n<p>Which ones grab you? See if you can figure out why they do. What did you learn?<\/p>\n<p>What might you do to draw your readers in?<\/p>\n<p><em>Note: Bonnie Leonard is a certified Life Coach and former Dean of Continuing Education at Wellesley College. You can find out more about Bonnie&#8217;s <a title=\"journaling program\" href=\"http:\/\/bonnieleonard.com\/nine-week-journaling-program-reinvent-your-life-write-now\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">new nine-week journaling program, Reinvent Your Life ~ Write Now<\/a>, which emerged from her years of experience\u00a0empowering women to create new lives for themselves.<\/em><\/p>\n<p>Please share your first sentences below (or any writing tips as well).<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Here&#8217;s a great short book writing tip I had to share. After a bit of a false start with her first chapter, Bonnie Leonard returned to book writing class the next week having begun again. She shared a brilliant strategy I plan to try myself:\u00a0 she asked herself how she could start her book&#8211;and each&#8230;<a class=\"more-link\" href=\"https:\/\/jodieburdette.net\/lisatener\/2013\/01\/how-to-write-a-first-sentence-that-draws-readers-in\/\"><em>&nbsp; Read more<\/em><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":2,"featured_media":7882,"comment_status":"closed","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"_acf_changed":false,"_et_pb_use_builder":"","_et_pb_old_content":"","_et_gb_content_width":"","_genesis_hide_title":false,"_genesis_hide_breadcrumbs":false,"_genesis_hide_singular_image":false,"_genesis_hide_footer_widgets":false,"_genesis_custom_body_class":"","_genesis_custom_post_class":"","_genesis_layout":"","footnotes":""},"categories":[50,100,1678,1,27,36],"tags":[1252,1253,1251],"class_list":{"0":"post-7206","1":"post","2":"type-post","3":"status-publish","4":"format-standard","5":"has-post-thumbnail","7":"category-book-writing-class","8":"category-book-writing-questions","9":"category-how-to-write-a-book","10":"category-more","11":"category-writing-challenges","12":"category-writing-courses","13":"tag-how-to-start-a-book","14":"tag-how-to-start-a-chapter-of-a-book","15":"tag-how-to-write-a-first-sentence","16":"entry"},"acf":[],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/jodieburdette.net\/lisatener\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/7206","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/jodieburdette.net\/lisatener\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/jodieburdette.net\/lisatener\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/jodieburdette.net\/lisatener\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/2"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/jodieburdette.net\/lisatener\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=7206"}],"version-history":[{"count":1,"href":"https:\/\/jodieburdette.net\/lisatener\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/7206\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":279219,"href":"https:\/\/jodieburdette.net\/lisatener\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/7206\/revisions\/279219"}],"wp:featuredmedia":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/jodieburdette.net\/lisatener\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media\/7882"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/jodieburdette.net\/lisatener\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=7206"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/jodieburdette.net\/lisatener\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=7206"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/jodieburdette.net\/lisatener\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=7206"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}