{"id":16145,"date":"2018-08-29T18:23:07","date_gmt":"2018-08-29T23:23:07","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/lisatener.local\/?p=16145"},"modified":"2024-09-30T08:56:45","modified_gmt":"2024-09-30T12:56:45","slug":"a-cure-for-most-writing-ills-tell-a-story","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/jodieburdette.net\/lisatener\/2018\/08\/a-cure-for-most-writing-ills-tell-a-story\/","title":{"rendered":"A Cure for Most Writing Ills? Tell a Story"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignleft size-medium wp-image-6197\" src=\"https:\/\/jodieburdette.net\/lisatener\/wp-content\/uploads\/2012\/05\/luke-with-baby-book-205x300.jpg\" alt=\"tell a story\" width=\"205\" height=\"300\" srcset=\"https:\/\/jodieburdette.net\/lisatener\/wp-content\/uploads\/2012\/05\/luke-with-baby-book-205x300.jpg 205w, https:\/\/jodieburdette.net\/lisatener\/wp-content\/uploads\/2012\/05\/luke-with-baby-book-701x1024.jpg 701w, https:\/\/jodieburdette.net\/lisatener\/wp-content\/uploads\/2012\/05\/luke-with-baby-book-103x150.jpg 103w, https:\/\/jodieburdette.net\/lisatener\/wp-content\/uploads\/2012\/05\/luke-with-baby-book-768x1122.jpg 768w, https:\/\/jodieburdette.net\/lisatener\/wp-content\/uploads\/2012\/05\/luke-with-baby-book-1051x1536.jpg 1051w, https:\/\/jodieburdette.net\/lisatener\/wp-content\/uploads\/2012\/05\/luke-with-baby-book-1402x2048.jpg 1402w, https:\/\/jodieburdette.net\/lisatener\/wp-content\/uploads\/2012\/05\/luke-with-baby-book-85x125.jpg 85w, https:\/\/jodieburdette.net\/lisatener\/wp-content\/uploads\/2012\/05\/luke-with-baby-book-72x106.jpg 72w, https:\/\/jodieburdette.net\/lisatener\/wp-content\/uploads\/2012\/05\/luke-with-baby-book-100x146.jpg 100w, https:\/\/jodieburdette.net\/lisatener\/wp-content\/uploads\/2012\/05\/luke-with-baby-book-640x935.jpg 640w, https:\/\/jodieburdette.net\/lisatener\/wp-content\/uploads\/2012\/05\/luke-with-baby-book-scaled.jpg 1752w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 205px) 100vw, 205px\" \/><\/p>\n<p>Can you tell a story?<\/p>\n<p>I recently read a book proposal for a client&#8217;s book that&#8217;s been a couple of years in the making. I&#8217;m so proud of him.<\/p>\n<p>He had the right instinct for his overview<em>\u2014<\/em>telling a compelling story from the get-go. Yet, it started out dry, clinical, like many proposals I read on the first pass. I knew he could do better.<\/p>\n<h2>[bctt tweet=&#8221;How to Write a Compelling Anecdote&#8221; username=&#8221;LisaTener&#8221;]<\/h2>\n<p>I waved my magic wand on a description of his son&#8217;s remarks and<em>\u2014ta da<\/em><em>\u2014<\/em>a generic description became dialogue<em>\u2014<\/em>four simple words in double quotes. Another wave of the wand and<em>\u2014ta da da<\/em><em>\u2014<\/em>the dialogue floats from the end of the paragraph to the very first line.<\/p>\n<p>All right. We can hear his son&#8217;s voice from the very first sentence. We&#8217;re hooked. What next?<\/p>\n<figure id=\"attachment_16147\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-16147\" style=\"width: 300px\" class=\"wp-caption alignright\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"wp-image-16147 size-medium\" src=\"https:\/\/jodieburdette.net\/lisatener\/wp-content\/uploads\/2018\/08\/jordan-silouette-e1535583337827-300x225.jpg\" alt=\"Tell a story\" width=\"300\" height=\"225\" srcset=\"https:\/\/jodieburdette.net\/lisatener\/wp-content\/uploads\/2018\/08\/jordan-silouette-e1535583337827-300x225.jpg 300w, https:\/\/jodieburdette.net\/lisatener\/wp-content\/uploads\/2018\/08\/jordan-silouette-e1535583337827-150x113.jpg 150w, https:\/\/jodieburdette.net\/lisatener\/wp-content\/uploads\/2018\/08\/jordan-silouette-e1535583337827-100x75.jpg 100w, https:\/\/jodieburdette.net\/lisatener\/wp-content\/uploads\/2018\/08\/jordan-silouette-e1535583337827.jpg 320w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 300px) 100vw, 300px\" \/><figcaption id=\"caption-attachment-16147\" class=\"wp-caption-text\">Paint a picture with your words.<\/figcaption><\/figure>\n<p>I ended the brief quotation with a name and the son&#8217;s age. Let&#8217;s picture him. I suggested a few quirky details to bring this young person to life<em>\u2014his posture, his walk, his unusual clothing<\/em>.<\/p>\n<p>Now, the author can make his point. The story isn&#8217;t much more than a paragraph but it draws us in, comes alive, has its quirkiness, feels real.<\/p>\n<p>Engage your reader; doing all the work for her distances her from the action. Rather than spoon feeding readers<em>\u2014<\/em>in this case agents and acquisitions editors<em>\u2014<\/em>a conclusion, strong writing helps readers draw their own conclusions.<\/p>\n<h2>[bctt tweet=&#8221;Read Memoir and Fiction to Learn to Tell a Story&#8221; username=&#8221;LisaTener&#8221;]<\/h2>\n<p>Anecdotes in a how-to, self-help or business book may be short, but they need vitality to resonate and keep your readers reading.<\/p>\n<p>You can certainly read successful how-to and business books to find examples of well told, yet brief stories. Yet, I also encourage you to read fiction and memoir. These master storytellers can help you go deeper with your writing and have a greater impact on your readers.<\/p>\n<p>The more you read, the more your subsconscious can draw upon the great writing you&#8217;ve read.<\/p>\n<h2>3 Creative Processes to Inspire a Powerful Story<\/h2>\n<p>The following creative tools can help you tell a story in a dynamic way:<\/p>\n<p><strong>Metaphor<\/strong>:\u00a0In one of my favorite posts of all time, <a rel=\"noopener\" href=\"https:\/\/jodieburdette.net\/lisatener\/2012\/10\/when-youre-sad-you-make-a-rainbow-and-other-writing-secrets\/\" target=\"_blank\">When You&#8217;re Sad You Make a Rainbow\u00a0and Other Writing Secrets<\/a>, I share how my son&#8217;s stream-of-consciousness metaphor can teach us how to discover metaphors and symbols that heighten our writing. And, yes, I tell a story.<\/p>\n<p><strong>Dreams<\/strong>: In this interview, dream expert Kari Hohne teaches us <a rel=\"noopener\" href=\"https:\/\/jodieburdette.net\/lisatener\/2017\/12\/24-hour-mind-writing-inspiration-innovation\/\" target=\"_blank\">how to access our 24 hour mind for writing and inspiration<\/a>, particularly through our dreams.<\/p>\n<p><strong>Creative Visualization<\/strong>: If you&#8217;ve been reading my blog for a while, you&#8217;ll be familiar with my <a rel=\"noopener\" href=\"https:\/\/jodieburdette.net\/lisatener\/meet-your-muse\/\" target=\"_blank\">&#8220;Meet Your Muse&#8221; exercise<\/a> to access your creative source for answers to your book writing questions. Ask your <a rel=\"noopener\" href=\"https:\/\/jodieburdette.net\/lisatener\/2017\/12\/what-does-your-creative-muse-say-about-your-book\/\" target=\"_blank\">muse<\/a> for a metaphor, a story, a description, how to start with a person you know and bring them to life on the page. You can access your muse through this free <a rel=\"noopener\" href=\"https:\/\/jodieburdette.net\/lisatener\/meet-your-muse\/\" target=\"_blank\">creative visualization for writers<\/a>.<\/p>\n<p>What are your favorite tools to make your writing vibrant and real for your readers?<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Can you tell a story? I recently read a book proposal for a client&#8217;s book that&#8217;s been a couple of years in the making. I&#8217;m so proud of him. He had the right instinct for his overview\u2014telling a compelling story from the get-go. 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