{"id":13071,"date":"2015-11-09T19:22:55","date_gmt":"2015-11-10T00:22:55","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/lisatener.local\/?p=13071"},"modified":"2024-09-30T08:58:44","modified_gmt":"2024-09-30T12:58:44","slug":"how-to-write-well","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/jodieburdette.net\/lisatener\/2015\/11\/how-to-write-well\/","title":{"rendered":"How to Write Well: Embracing the Gifts of English"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignleft wp-image-5955 size-medium\" src=\"https:\/\/jodieburdette.net\/lisatener\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/04\/sidebar-top-biopic-238x300.jpg\" alt=\"book proposal coach lisa tener\" width=\"238\" height=\"300\" \/><\/p>\n<p>A few months ago, I received an email from a woman in Norway who told me she planned to take time off from her executive career to write a\u00a0book on leadership. &#8220;I plan to \u00a0travel to Boston for two months to write my\u00a0book and work with you.&#8221; By our next email, she had bought her plane tickets.<\/p>\n<p>I wasn&#8217;t quite sure how I would help an author writing in another language. I could not be her editor. But her certainty that this would work won me over. And the collaboration has been both exciting and satisfying.<\/p>\n<p>When we get together to discuss the book, I have discovered that she writes\u00a0in a combination of English and Norweigan.\u00a0I wondered why.<\/p>\n<p>&#8220;English has so many\u00a0words for almost anything&#8221;&#8211;each with its specific nuances. For emotions, for example, Norweigan offers just the basics, while English presents\u00a0so many different options, each with their nuanced expression.<\/p>\n<p>One of the things I love about writing and editing is searching for &#8220;le bon mot&#8221; \u2014 that perfect word which conveys so much with so little.<\/p>\n<h1>How to Write Well<\/h1>\n<p>When an author writes, &#8220;He went&#8230;&#8221; I invite him\u00a0to get specific about how: Did the person walk or run? More specifically, how did he walk? Did he saunter? Meander? Hobble? Sprint? Your verb choice can take an abstract notion &#8220;went&#8221; and make\u00a0the action leap off the page: It becomes real for your reader. They can picture it, smell it, taste it, sense it.<\/p>\n<p>We sometimes take for granted what a flexible\u00a0and rich\u00a0language we have, offering vast choices that can\u00a0give our writing depth, overtones, subtlely and vivid expression.<\/p>\n<p><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignright wp-image-13219 size-medium\" src=\"https:\/\/jodieburdette.net\/lisatener\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/11\/journal-with-fall-backdrop-300x225.jpg\" alt=\"journal with fall backdrop\" width=\"300\" height=\"225\" srcset=\"https:\/\/jodieburdette.net\/lisatener\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/11\/journal-with-fall-backdrop-300x225.jpg 300w, https:\/\/jodieburdette.net\/lisatener\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/11\/journal-with-fall-backdrop-150x113.jpg 150w, https:\/\/jodieburdette.net\/lisatener\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/11\/journal-with-fall-backdrop-768x576.jpg 768w, https:\/\/jodieburdette.net\/lisatener\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/11\/journal-with-fall-backdrop-100x75.jpg 100w, https:\/\/jodieburdette.net\/lisatener\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/11\/journal-with-fall-backdrop-640x480.jpg 640w, https:\/\/jodieburdette.net\/lisatener\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/11\/journal-with-fall-backdrop.jpg 1017w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 300px) 100vw, 300px\" \/>Shakespeare, of course, was a master of this. By contrast,\u00a0the modern\u00a0directive\u00a0to &#8220;write for an eighth grade vocabulary&#8221; can inflict the damage of pressuring more and more words into disuse.<\/p>\n<p>While you don&#8217;t want to use arcane words for a trade book meant for a wide audience, I encourage you to play with what you see as the limits. Push on them just a little when a less\u00a0common word truly does offer more clarity of meaning.<\/p>\n<p>Avoid shorthand with your verb\u00a0choice, too. The more a\u00a0verb brings the action to life, the more you draw your readers in&#8211;whether you are writing a memoir, a novel, an anecdote for a self help book or a blog post.<\/p>\n<p>So, tell me, what do you love about the English language? What&#8217;s one of your favorite words? What questions do you have on how to write well? Or what tips can you share?<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>A few months ago, I received an email from a woman in Norway who told me she planned to take time off from her executive career to write a\u00a0book on leadership. &#8220;I plan to \u00a0travel to Boston for two months to write my\u00a0book and work with you.&#8221; By our next email, she had bought her&#8230;<a class=\"more-link\" href=\"https:\/\/jodieburdette.net\/lisatener\/2015\/11\/how-to-write-well\/\"><em>&nbsp; Read more<\/em><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":2,"featured_media":13219,"comment_status":"closed","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"_acf_changed":false,"_et_pb_use_builder":"","_et_pb_old_content":"","_et_gb_content_width":"","_genesis_hide_title":false,"_genesis_hide_breadcrumbs":false,"_genesis_hide_singular_image":false,"_genesis_hide_footer_widgets":false,"_genesis_custom_body_class":"","_genesis_custom_post_class":"","_genesis_layout":"","footnotes":""},"categories":[1,42],"tags":[1742,1003],"class_list":{"0":"post-13071","1":"post","2":"type-post","3":"status-publish","4":"format-standard","5":"has-post-thumbnail","7":"category-more","8":"category-writing-secrets","9":"tag-english-language","10":"tag-how-to-write-well","11":"entry"},"acf":[],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/jodieburdette.net\/lisatener\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/13071","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/jodieburdette.net\/lisatener\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/jodieburdette.net\/lisatener\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/jodieburdette.net\/lisatener\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/2"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/jodieburdette.net\/lisatener\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=13071"}],"version-history":[{"count":1,"href":"https:\/\/jodieburdette.net\/lisatener\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/13071\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":279051,"href":"https:\/\/jodieburdette.net\/lisatener\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/13071\/revisions\/279051"}],"wp:featuredmedia":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/jodieburdette.net\/lisatener\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media\/13219"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/jodieburdette.net\/lisatener\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=13071"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/jodieburdette.net\/lisatener\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=13071"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/jodieburdette.net\/lisatener\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=13071"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}